Mewls

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Fairie kin, mumbled understandings
sometimes those whose ways are not clear
Are they ones who satisfy?
Perhaps not
and Ones may take what they Will ,
the croaking bull frog with one good eye,
Sometimes skips and mostly plops

Pulsating throats and dissolving mewls,
They skitter
like stones skipping the glassy lake.
She comes in swampy drifts  
then glows with eructating fevers
whose Hand is the one beating?

I always wanted to tie up
and make stretched
Drawn and quartered,
          riven and spitted
some cooking helps
High heat
          sautéed slivers
and then He partakes and
settles
  

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AngelineAngelinealmost 20 years ago
Excellently Writ

as always Razz, though I tend to agree with YDD that the lyricism of the first stanzas is somewhat diminished by the last--though the last two lines pull it all together nicely IMHO. :)

bluerainsbluerainsalmost 20 years ago
agreed

this is very lyrical...and refreshing...enjoyed reading...o)) bluerains

TathagataTathagataalmost 20 years ago
swampy

Hidden kingdoms.

cat-o nine tails and green algae

I can see/smell this very clearly

I always thought Fae lived around the pond I grew up near also.

very lyrical

Thank you

YDDYDDalmost 20 years ago
Crying, belching evanesce

I like your word choices in this piece,

but I don't follow the connection from the first two stanzas to the last.

WickedEveWickedEvealmost 20 years ago
I like this

I simply like it. I'm not sure what else to say about it at the moment (I always have that problem when it comes to your poetry) :) I just know that it's a very good poem and I enjoyed reading it.

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