- Non-Erotic Poetry
- mirror of surrender
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Click here demur whispers
relinquish thoughts of
despondency
honor in trust
secure
proclamation justified
viewed by a
projector of
elements
understood is
the creative
original
illuminating
its right
to assimulate
the dance
a sea of music
drifts through
lullaby sighs
as a mockingbird
sings
free at last...
- COMMENTS
YDDalmost 20 years agoOften poets are told to condense or tighten their work,
to chop out as much verbiage as possible.
This work is right on the edge of become inscrutable.
Particularly since the poet abstains from punctuation.
After you cut through the quick to the bone,
be careful you don't chip it.
The more you cut beyond a certain point, the fewer readers will appreciate the work.
I like:
"understood is
the creative
original
illuminating
its right
to assimulate
the dance"
Even with the error.
