- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Your Life
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Nothing in life is guaranteed
Your life is yours for the living
Things have a way of working out
All you can do is keep on giving
Many years can pass unhappily
Life is only as good as you make it
You cannot go through life without living
You cannot continue to fake it
Live your life and enjoy it
Find for your life it's one true love
You will never regret what you didn't do
This is your own gift from above
Happiness comes to those who wait
It is there for us to achieve
We just have to be patient
In ourselves, we have to believe
- COMMENTS
damppantiesalmost 20 years agoA very simple and to the point message said in beautiful words. Thank you for that.
Annoraalmost 20 years agoPoetry is elusive in it's beauty. It can conjure so many pictures by the same words two will see it. They will get what they need from the poetry.
This is a beautiful reminder for the readers.
Enjoy what is real let go of the things that aren't.
WickedEvealmost 20 years agoYour "A Way of Life" shows more originality. This is okay but much of what you say is rehashed.
For example, these lines (or ones almost identical) have been used many times before, making them no longer original:
Nothing in life is guaranteed
Your life is yours for the living
Things have a way of working out
Life is only as good as you make it
Happiness comes to those who wait
Actually, almost the entire poem is basically used phrases.
Use your A Way of Life poem as a guideline for writing poetry that does more showing than telling. It's a much better poem.
My Erotic Tailalmost 20 years agoyou are a great peot~ very touching with your word wizard-ry...LadyShianne's day of poetry is here...and I hope to see many many more...nice selection S~
