- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Un-Bending Desires
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The Un-seeing Eye
sees all,
feels more
the Mind is a
strange place,
opens new vistas
many possibilities
vast visages
close palpitating skins
Touch is near
heated flesh afar
when the hours
draw nigh,
who moves in
strange ways.
Take the end
put it at
the beginning,
would any do
other than what they did.
sometimes the
journey is nice,
many times the end
is better,
I want it all,
the journey
and the end
One and alone
Wrap't in My cloth
of leather,
raining down
staccato flurries,
reddened flesh
lightened skins
stretched taut
taken slowly
Each skein calling
Make me Yours
Take me there,
alone or together,
that mongoose trap
slowly shut
as He sat and
ate the snake.
- COMMENTS
YDDalmost 20 years agoThe poet creates unusual images with his novel use of words,
often it is difficult to follow the theme skein throughout his poems.
This time the thesis is there, but I find the title slightly mismatched until one sees an active verb form.
My favorite passage:
"Take the end
put it at
the beginning,
would any do
other than what they did."
