Terzanelle at 4 a.m.

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Angeline
Angeline
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Beethoven’s Violin Concerto proceeds
like clockwork, movements trill and roll
in artifice. Nothing’s unkempt, nothing bleeds

that doesn’t feel, that lives without a soul.
Is beauty made more beautiful by pain
like clockwork movements trill and roll?

It’s simpler not to feel when you remain,
when someone else moves on, the world
is beauty, made more beautiful by pain

experienced, not held too tight, not curled
within the palm of night always mourning.
When someone else moves on the world

continues, always something new aborning.
Time rolls on, a symphony bypassing death
within the palm of night always mourning.

Time rolls on, a symphony bypassing death.
Faces come and go. You barely catch your breath.
Beethoven’s Violin Concerto proceeds
in artifice. Nothing’s unkempt, nothing bleeds.

Angeline
Angeline
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VareseNocturnVareseNocturnover 12 years ago
Love all over this poem

Another well balanced terza rima, quatrain is gorgeous

bluerainsbluerainsalmost 20 years ago
sometimes

sad is our comfort zone....I have found in past...a very soulful pen...far reaching ...am feeling the words of this...thanks...bluerain

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
I cannot

get bored in reading your poetry.. maybe put me to sleep, but not bored ;) Fab Ange, simply fab.

twelveoonetwelveoonealmost 20 years ago
Very Impressive work

quite moving, very nice flow

jthserrajthserraalmost 20 years ago
A painful concerto...

the cello by moonlight. The rolling repetition of powerful lines accentuate the lingering sadness, as memories roll past in the ache of morning. These words form a powerful tribute, one that is felt beyond your page or this computer screen. I think another feels it too.

jim : )

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