Elixir

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bluerains
bluerains
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 Sweet elixir in paradise dreams.
 Fountain magic the patcholi queen.
 Raptured memories aroma keep
 intoxicating my youthful sleep.
 The magic of your sweet perfume
moments spent inside your room.
 When love and I took wings of flight
in aromatic legend of just one night.

bluerains
bluerains
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YDDYDDalmost 20 years ago
Tonic

A so-so effort by a strong poet.

This work could use some elixer itself.

The rhyme and meter falter

and might so easily be fixed.

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