- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Dusk's jewels
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Tipi perched on an emerald peak
Cotton candy perimeter
Wisps of pink
Spreading to the mountainside beyond
Catching it ablaze
Red ruby knolls and draws
Blessed by sunset
Dusk’s jewels
A perfect setting
- COMMENTS
LeBrozover 16 years agoThis poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 38,000 poems.
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YDDalmost 20 years agoA common observation nicely drawn.
The colors are all there
and cloud wisps too.
Nature's nightly jewels
abound around Gaia's neck
before the tiara in her hair,
the diamonds nightly in the air.
Please keep writing like this.
Your imagery is very strong.
jthserraalmost 20 years agoat sunset. An beautiful observation in metaphor. Very good...
jim : )
