- Non-Erotic Poetry
- breathless
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Click here breath of life pauses
and nothing finds silent echos
coiled in heart rhythms
earth whispers
Inhaling the wind
life recalls a
well spring of raindrops
sleeping in puddles
senses awaken
remanants transended
a miracle forgotten
in moments exhaled
- COMMENTS
LeBrozover 17 years agoAt first, first four lines seem out of place
Like they should be between the inhale and exhale;
But looking further, they're even better positioned at the start
For here they set, between the last {unwritten} exhale
And this first inhale
Giving with economy of words
Greater breadth to the poem.
sweet GA peachesover 18 years agoin the light of such heaven, is to find poetry that runs through my heart... thus, breathless... -sweet GA peaches-
