She won't cry

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You see the pain that
lies in her eyes,
But, alas, her eyes are dry,
She won't cry.
No, she won't cry.

You see the anger that burns from her gaze,
The madness that sets her eyes ablaze,
She won't cry.
No, she won't cry.

You see the fear that closes her eyes,
The smile she wears is but a disguise,
She won't cry.
No, she won't cry.

You see the hope that is finally dead,
She cannot trust for her heart has been bled,
She won't cry.
No, she won't cry.

You see the love that lies within,
But she shall never love again,
She won't cry.
No, she won't cry.

You see death's hand that has glazed her eyes,
No one saw her die inside,
They won't cry.
No, they won't cry

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sacksackover 18 years ago
very effective.....

can I cry?

sacksackover 18 years ago
very effective.....

can I cry?

PAPATOADPAPATOADover 18 years ago
Thank you

Great piece of work. Appreciate the result.

ChagrinedChagrinedover 18 years ago
WOW!! This was great!

Great editor and great poetess. Raw emotions!

can it get better??

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
A sad poem

Hi -

I know this is just a poetical story, but reading it engenders in me a powerful urge to make her cry, to give her some release, and (maybe!) lend some happiness.

Well done - The stories I like are the ones with emotion.

Thanks

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