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Click herei see you standing
in the remote corners
of your exquisite poems
a mysterious conjurer
with your magic quill
dipped in blood and evening light
willing your words
to paint music and sing pictures
i can't seem
to summon you out
of the darkness
so i'll let your spells
draw me into
the shadows with you
my mind drifted into dark chocolate and red wine when I read this poem, which is just as rich and deep. Beautiful is not the word I am looking for...seductive? exotic? It is beautiful, but that seems almost too trivial of a word. hmmm I really loved it.
and fully blooded
conjure up some more
Perks's suggestion is a good one, references are nice, even if they are buried
"dipped in blood"? that is so out of place in this poem, unless it refers to the poet, but how am I to know. I don't know what you read. Either refer to it so the reader gets it too, or dip your quill in something that's not so sanguine.
This is getting close to the poetboy I fell in love and lust with. *smirks*
...phrasing, and I find this much more appealing than your shorter works. Good luck to you in those shadows!