- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Cold Comfort
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Storm stalled mind
numb, chill
blizzard blind
no tip of nose
eyelash end
Frenzied flurry flash
dizzy, dancing
detours thought
crystal ice
distortion
Blanket biting sting
avalanche isolation
enforced torpor
flaked out
and under
Cloud white cocoon
catacomb quiet
cold comfort
quilts
consciousness
Awareness’ opposite
icicle suspension
imagination
drip drip
dripping
- COMMENTS
LeBrozabout 17 years agoThis poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 35,000 poems.
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LeBrozabout 17 years agoExcellent example of employment of alliteration; pulls the reader in just to continue to hear the sounds you've generated here.
WickedEveover 19 years agonot too much, just enough to make it a great read.
*No longer using the thermometer.
Syndra Lynnover 19 years agoI love alliteration and this offers so much more. The frozen mind and thaw of imagination, or coming back to life after a cold spell. I can relate. Nice!
BlueskyBeautyover 19 years agoi loved the way this flowed off my tongue, right to the very last drip! ~winks~
