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Click hereTonight the dome glows
like a dome just can't,
(you would say)
not actually for real, right?
Mirages of racing Laputa rocks
skims the horizon,
spider web superstratic
mist trails shift from purple black
to cotton candy pink
and back, an impossible
(again, you)
kaleidoscope of cloud,
until reaching zenith.
Then evaporate
with the cyan to black enigma
into a deep space vacuum.
Constellations wink in jest
behind our backs.
And the moon,
well,
(just like you)
the moon is nowhere
to be found.
- COMMENTS
Maria2394over 19 years agoread, yes I did love it, and the constellatins wink in jest, behind our backs, thats a great line!!
BlueskyBeautyover 19 years ago...the critiquers critique and just say this was a lovely read.
vivid and fresh, your phrasing was wonderful.
