Inhumanity

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The Mutt
The Mutt
53 Followers

In the name of God they came
and slaughtered all that they found there,
every fleeing man, every pleading woman, every crying child.
Even the turning earth was stunned to stillness
by the sight of babies torn from their mother's breast
and slain before their disbelieving eyes.
And when the land was death-empty,
they built a gleaming temple there,
atop a mount of sun-bleached skulls,
that they might worship the Author of Life.

In the name of God they came,
to fulfill their destinies in a land of gold,
and they planted flags and crosses
in a world of infinite horizon.
But the golden earth was already filled
with bronze people and ancestor spirits and the thunder of life.
So they stole the gold and slew the spirit
and made the new land manifestly empty,
and drove the bronze people to deserts of disease and despair,
or sent them to their ancestors,
planting them under the cross
of a God of Infinite Mercy.

In the name of God they came,
in wooden ships, with chains of iron,
and leather-bound words on gilt-edged paper,
and they suffered the little children to come to them.
The black-robed blessed the forced passage
of the black-skinned across a gray ocean
to the cotton-white fields of the land of the free.
And the overlords prayed on their fears,
and vowed that their black lives would be better
when they were pale and dead,
if they would only sing the hymns of The Redeemer.

In the name of God they came,
in fiery chariots with wings of steel,
to split the world and slay the lords of avarice.
With twin swords of hate and fear, they shattered the dawn,
as ashen faces stared skyward in disbelief.
They set the oil-soaked world ablaze,
igniting a towering rage that burned across oceans,
scorching the earth to sand.
And the armies of righteousness rode out,
following a pillar of fire and a pillar of smoke,
and the war horses, frothing and gray,
led the charge for the Prince of Peace.

In the name of God they came,
to tear lovers from each other's arms,
and brand them with the scarlet A of abomination.
And they tore apart the words of freedom
and cracked the foundation of liberty,
papering it over with pages torn from a grim fairy tale
that promises eternal damnation to all
who dare to love too like themselves.
And they wrote in stone that the lovers should be forever other,
forever less, forever afraid to kiss, to hold, to have,
as if one could choose to love or not to love,
as if it were not a choice to choose to worship a God of Love.

In the name of God they came,
and they prayed and they preached and they sang,
of Love and Mercy, of Life and Peace.
Loudly they sang, against cruelty and war,
to mask the screams of the dying.
Long they preached, against hate and death,
until the rivers ran red with blood.
And they looked upon their handiwork and they were well pleased,
and they prayed upon the burning, empty earth,
though there was no one left to hear,
and they pronounced it good and just and merciful,
in the name of God.

The Mutt
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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
This poem points out hypocrisy quite well.

Not only does this poem point out the Grand Hypocrisy of the excuses people use to hurt/destroy others, but it does so with style. Since such poetry can often move people--give them a little shove in a more socially conscious direction-- I wonder if we could called it "applied poetry"? Or perhaps "active poetry"? Maybe Mutt can be the founder of a new genre of poetry :)

This poem reminds me of Twain's "The War Prayer".

What I like about this poem is the word plays:

"made the new land manifestly empty", and "they suffered the little children to come to them." There are quite a few more like that, and they really pop--just grab your attention. And then there are lines like this: "...blessed the forced passage of the black-skinned across a gray ocean to the cotton-white fields..." Nice use of colors. And there is even alliteration: "...deserts of disease and despair." The entire poem is chalked with poetic nuggets. And the progression through time up to (and especially) the present day U.S. makes the poem particularly applicable to our lives. The tired phrase "history repeats itself" comes to mind, although people are quite masterful at making themselves believe the actions of their generation are unique. This poem illustrates the sad, repeating hypocrisy that can be found between the difference of what people claim they are doing and what they actually do.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
The inhumanities......

...carried out in "god's" name are legion and are scattered through history. This is a strong and moving poem. One of the best of an amazing collection.

CharleyHCharleyHover 19 years ago
"Stunned to stillness"

What a line. I was captured by this poem through the movement of time from past to future, yet what you were doing didn't quite kick in until the third stanza when it became most clear. I felt it could have had more clarity in this respect, but then I have only read it a couple of times and may not be familiar with historical events you speak too. However, you have definately given a broad (through time) and narrow (through religion) perspective to inhumanity, and the form and content of your poem, in this respect, taken together, forms a powerful comment on the theme.

ferociouskittycatferociouskittycatover 19 years ago
Wow Mutt

Graphic and VERY touching!!

Fantastic... what can I say that they haven't already? ;-)

BooMerengueBooMerengueover 19 years ago
!

This leaves me feeling so cold, Mutt. We are supposed to be made in god's image... yikes! Which god?

I have read and reread and will read again. Its great! Thanks!

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