Venus Smiles

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A moment's embrace
The growth of feeling
Hands fall
             D
             O
             W
             N

Aflurryofmovement
And all passion lays bare.

     Gentle motions
                                        Grow faster
     And harder
                                        Back
     And forth
                                        until...
             the...
                    EXPLOSION

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sandspikesandspikeover 19 years ago
I like it......

but didn't fall in love. I love different layouts, where

words show up in different places, but this was over done.

The words are good but the layout was a little too bold

for me.

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