senryu: threshing oats

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Part 6 of the 6 part series

Updated 08/30/2017
Created 09/19/2002
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threshing oats
cicada lands on my head
i scream like a little girl

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5 Comments
LeBrozLeBrozover 16 years ago
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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 36,500 poems.

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doormousedoormouseover 19 years ago
LOL!!

Short, sweet and fuckin' funny LOL

Congrats on the E!!!

LOL I'm going to hear that scream all day ;-)

twelveoonetwelveooneover 19 years ago
I hate to say it

I would too

& same as eve says

hmmm, what did see give you, I guess I should too

WickedEveWickedEveover 19 years ago
poetic and humorous

Many things can land on your head and induce a girl scream, but using cicada was very poetic. And the activity of threshing oats was truly original.

SeattleRainSeattleRainover 19 years ago
I will see this all day!

this is hilarious

great use of your humor and writing talent-- Congrats on the Eeeeeee!

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