- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Stolen Dreams
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Click hereLet's go back
to where you drank.
Accusations always
ended on my pillow.
Tears wasted.
Years wasted.
Don't take my old moon too.
That's one thing
you can't steal.
- COMMENTS
Belegonover 19 years agoLots of room for a person to find their own personal meanings here and yet no doubt that you were expressing some of your own personal meanings. The sparseness of the lines feeds into this and enhances it.
matriarchover 19 years agoemotion contained in so few words.
An exquisite rendering of the disintegration of a relationship. Well done Dor. Mat xx
Anonymousover 19 years agoDM,
So sad, so full of emotion, leaves me at a loss for words. Beautiful.
