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muscle ripples
softness pillows
curves accommodate
strength encompasses

caresses begin
bodies respond
tempo increases
crescendo builds

arms engulf
lips meet
bodies strain
legs entwine

tongues roam
breasts swell
spines arch
hips pump

toes curl
fingers flex
hands clench
feet stiffen

breath sputters
moans escape
screams emerge
sighs echo

minds open
hearts overflow
memories form
time lapses

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lostandfounderlostandfounderover 19 years ago
I like most of the poem but....

there is the end line "time lapses" that seems like such a letdown after all the glorious lovemaking. A reminder that nothing lasts forever I suppose....Good work Irish.

TathagataTathagataover 19 years ago
I like

the whole idea of this.

when using this few words, though, you have to make every one count..

Try doing it one verse at a time and finding the Perfect word to describe it

do hips " arch" or do they " reach"?

you see?

I think there's a great poem here if you find just the right words...

: )

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