- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Bramblewood Musing
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Out of tangled thorns
this garden nurtures
little lies and deceits…
thorny thickets
entwined with nesting petals,
so rare that the dew
becomes a teardrop
on the rose.
- COMMENTS
PatCarringtonover 19 years agoi liked it best of your 3 today / i understand 'crane' was totally different, like being in the science lab, and to tell you the truth i'm not sure how i feel about the final product / i have a feeling 'crane' is not a completed project yet /
flyguy69over 19 years agoOne question: do the petals entwine the thickets, or v.v.? "...thickets/entwining nesting petals..."
