- Non-Erotic Poetry
- The View
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Click hereHere on my balcony
I see the moon and the stars
Between here and the sea
There are lights, Bright lights
Then just Blackness
The lights represent those few moments
The moments I cherish
But beyond is the blackness
Nothing but blackness, or Nothing
Blackness
Across the water, the mainland
Greece. I know it's there
I see it in the morning
When the sun shines
At night it's gone
The sun shines no more
- COMMENTS
Chagrinedabout 19 years agoThe only change I could think of was to use the phrase:
Nothing but blackness, or Nothing
Blackness
and change it to
Nothing but blackness, or Blackest Nothing.
But hey, what do I know?
Liarover 19 years agoThis poem is mentioned in the New Poems thread on the forum.
sandspikeover 19 years agoThis work has PO but is lacking something. Quit sandbagging
and give us all your thoughts. Good start.
Tathagataover 19 years agothe simplicity of this..although I'd like a little more " meat" on it.
It does convey a nice picture/ feeling of sadness and resignation.
