Bad sport

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New sports bar in town
Jam packed
world series and college football
on big screen mama
and her brood of offspring
various shapes and sizes
perched about the room
requisite waitresses in too-tight tee’s
and spandex tights
spinning like tops
provide service
and too often incorrect change
customers advise the owner
of the errors
but he seems unperturbed
more interested in getting laid
than his business succeeding

he won’t

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tazz317tazz317almost 12 years ago
THE MORAL DONT WHERE YOU EAT

should be #1 in enforcement. TK U MLJ LV NV

duddle146duddle146about 17 years ago
Typical

Go into almost any poorly run Sports Bar in town and encounter the real life situation of which this poet writes.

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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The owner's focus is on the wrong line; and soon he'll have all of nothing.

sacksackover 19 years ago
very well written!

offbeat idea, lovingly presented! Just great!

flyguy69flyguy69over 19 years ago
Clever

I like the haiku ending!

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