Whatnot

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I'm entertaining thoughts
of knot and not
being twisted tight
or come undone

a slow but steady unravelling
of all that's gone before
strung out and along
a line unending

the ongoing strain
to keep it all contained
compressed and under wraps
without a sudden snap

or pop then strands
flying bands of sinew and skin
spread out remains
but nothing left within

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Maria2394Maria2394over 19 years ago
clever

quick and witty, loved the alliteration :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
I loved this...

..when I saw it - somewhere - in the folds of the PDF and I still love it. So many clever metaphors and great lines - there's even some tasty alliteration. A hefty 5.

annaswirlsannaswirlsover 19 years ago
very cool

I like how this one started with "entertaining the thought" and I got this idea of having a party for the brain which is exactly what you did. great use of sounds to get your messages across

LilDarlinLilDarlinover 19 years ago
Knots~

All tied up in knots, yet not..

Great one. A lot of depth and imagery.

Loved this one~~!!

* flying bands of sinew and skin *..

Wow ~~ great line there..

More please..~!!

*Smiles*

flyguy69flyguy69over 19 years ago
Wound up tight!

The words, the metaphor, the form; not a loose end in sight! Great work, TT2U.

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