Closet Tannenbaum

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Angeline
Angeline
86 Followers

Six wire hangers,
lots of twist-ties.
Lots. Don't forget
the masking tape.

Everything binds
together. When
I spread the hangers
into a tree, he says

Industrial! Minimalist!

Our eyes smile

at my amateur marvel.
Tiny lights. Little jewels
twined in gold garland.
It's a feathery necklace,
conical, too big to ship,
so it shines from a berth
on the speaker, and we
watch it shine.

He bends over me. Red, blue,
green, purple sparkle.

He says
You smell so good.

Angeline
Angeline
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LeBrozLeBrozalmost 17 years ago
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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 35,000 poems.

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LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
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This verse, like your tree, minimalist!

sacksackabout 19 years ago
A pleasant scene....

I liked the "green purple sparkle" line and "too big to ship". This poem is a marvel of economy and a joy to read. Lovely!

The_FoolThe_Foolover 19 years ago
Color

How do you color Christmas? How do you color love? With all the hues of the rainbow...*G*

LiarLiarover 19 years ago
Reviewed

Guess what? This poem is mentioned over at you-know-where.

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