Amante XII

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Part 12 of the 15 part series

Updated 05/12/2022
Created 06/22/2004
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Amante, here in one thousand points of light
jewel hued, nieve que cae, las estrellas shine
and candles’ dance. Lumenaria shiver bright

as frozen apples. The moon ornaments night
oro puro, querido, se calienta aquí. We entwine
Amante, here in one thousand points of light.

Our bodies, suavecito, stretch to hips. The flight,
nuestra libertad, comienza con besos. We incline
and candles dance, lumenaria shiver bright.

I see them in your eyes. I dream you. Our night
is hush and sigh, our secrets big as sky. Recline
Amante, here in one thousand points of light,

cover me with skin, forest me, give your sight
to mouths, fingertips. ¡Escuche! Swish of pine
and candles’ dance, lumenaria shiver bright.

Seasons del amor are passing, what is right
is precious prescience. There is no decline
Amante, here in one thousand points of light
and candles’ dance. Lumenaria shiver bright.

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LeBrozLeBrozover 16 years ago
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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 38,000 poems.

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TathagataTathagataover 19 years ago
Sorry

it took me so long to read this

holidays and all

but, as with the others, it is a whisper, on the edge on sleep, that lulls me into dreams of splendor and peace and bottomless love and tenderness.

My favorite verse:

~I see them in your eyes. I dream you. Our night

is hush and sigh, our secrets big as sky. Recline

Amante, here in one thousand points of light,~

Our night is hush and sigh

I love that

muy bueno mi querida

Gracias

The_FoolThe_Foolover 19 years ago
Elegant

Such a graceful dance.

LiarLiarover 19 years ago
Hi!

Your poem is mentioned in the New Poems thread.

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