winter butterflys

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canopy of haze
tree tops lost in mist
carpet of snow white
timber pillars
here
there
and there and ...

floating in mass
they zag and flutter
flicker and swirl
sail and rudder

swarming through the air
one here and there and more
watching safely from the door
snowflake size
winter butterfly's
dance of descending
destiny?
the blending

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sacksackover 19 years ago
delightful imagery....

Only the last two words stick out for me. They don't seem to work with the rest of the poem. Blending with what? The snow? Are the Winter butterflies white? MMMMMMMMmmmmmmmm..

WickedEveWickedEveover 19 years ago
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