- Erotic Poetry
- the Ravaging
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Click hereArms reached out in slight sensual sway,
directly out from her shoulders.
Flowing lightly in tender swirl
Fingers touching ... air!
naked to the world
for hungers deep seed
the need for flesh to knead
still she lay and ... 'plea'
Eyes closed and head tilted back
hair in trail and veil
bare she lays ravishing
awaiting ... the ravaging
The inner need to be consumed
by nip and beating hearts breath
to feel a tongue lapping
at your desires for more
the bittersweet of the soul
instilled is the animal passion
urges stronger than will
to lick primal dew drops ration
Eyes closed and head tilted back
mind in trail and wonder
finger glides caressing
engulfed ... in the ravaging
The grip and grasp to be crowned
the septor in no faulter
to share in feast of passions plate
spoon and fork coupled at an alter
arms in curl around thrusted love
grasping pains delight
relishing the taking
by strength, power and might
Eyes closed and moaning pleasured
filling and fulfilled one another
feverish lips tasting
savoring ... the ravaging
- COMMENTS
Ninja Nookieover 19 years agowell well do tell,
seranade me again for that was very moving, flawless. I sailed through this writing like a feather in the wind. Excellent piece. I so want to be ravaged now!
Du Lacover 19 years agoI swirled into this poem.. a tidal pool of desire. Very alluring and passion filled.. I feel the hunger the need the want to be consumed.. joining meshing living within the moment of bliss.. nice write thank you
du lac
sackover 19 years agoI was swept up in the passion! "By nip and beating hearts breath" is the only line I was a little confused with. Someone could be nipping at your body, but hearts don't nip. If the "beating hearts breath" was intended to be a separate thought, you could have written it like this:
by your nips...and my beating hearts breaths
"Your" and "My" would clarify that thought even more, IF that is what you intended. Otherwise, a very successful little poem!
