- Erotic Poetry
- reluctant lover
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Click herecareening secluded in
camouflaged fields of paradise
reposing behind layered veils
of reflection
she hears a whisper
a rogue voice amidst ruby twilight
breathing her name
on astral Aquarian winds
she senses
satyrical pools of an
obsidian heart
riven by
accursed insomnolence
driven by carnal virility
ravenous with desire
her hunger for love
accesses portaled entrance
Venus relinquishes
its goddess to
whispered waves
chanting to rhythms
of a wanton heart
she quickens
languid breathing
with her murmurs
and stirs masculinity
with a touch of
her essence
yielding firm body
she seduces the life
force from throbbing loins
releasing love's affliction
siren inhales
reptilians winter wings
love
now useless for a dark
star banished
from a world
of perfect harmony
yet
Venus knows
the beauty
of its pain
- COMMENTS
annaswirlsabout 19 years agoHi! Your poem has been mentioned in the New Poems Review thread:
http://www.literotica.com:81/forum/showthread.php?s=&postid=11260278#post11260278
Keep writing :)
Syndra Lynnabout 19 years agoa rogue voice amidst ruby twilight
breathing her name
on astral Aquarian winds
This is glorious!
moonblademabout 19 years ago"driven by carnal virility
ravenous with desire
her hunger for love
accesses portaled entrance
Venus relinquishes
its goddess to
whispered waves
chanting to rhythms
of a wanton heart"
I picked just two stanzas but you must know that I just love your word choices here, how they melded together into a wonderful flow. I very much enjoyed this, bluerains. Thanks for writing this. :)
Reltneabout 19 years agoThere are some superb phrases and images in this poem, but I find it a bit uneven in quality. You might want to set it aside for a time and the come back to it with a fresh eye. It would be worth it. This has the potential to be an excellent erotic poem. (IMHO)
