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Click hereMore snow?
Could be 20 inches
down east, and the mill
stinks all the way to town.
Saturday you washed
the car, hosing one side
of the windshield as I
made faces at you
on the other side
of the glass.
Spring seemed to breathe
closer, whisperedI could
to my unbuttoned coat.
The air was full of maybe
and mudseason jokes,
but now it's check the tire,
buy milk for the coffee,
bread for the duration.
This ain't MGM baby.
This is winter
grabbing the lapels
of the landscape
and giving it an icy shake
before creeping behind
the clouds, hiding from
Persephone's melting gaze.
I love the way you write.
Spring seemed to breathe
closer, whispered I could
to my unbuttoned coat.
This is a treasure, but the last line is my favorite!
Your poem is a promise of spring. She'll come out to read you, I'm sure! So please write more.
It ain't no MGM, but it was delightful anyway!! I'll think of this poem every time I wash my car!!
the truth;
~This is winter
grabbing the lapels
of the landscape
and giving it an icy shake
before creeping behind
the clouds, hiding from
Persephone's melting gaze.~
Thanks for the reminder
: P
Nice work