Submission

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Jennifer C
Jennifer C
43 Followers

Put yourself under my control
I promise you’ll be fine,
Lay down on the satin sheets
I’ll pour us both some wine.

The curtains closed the candles lit
The atmosphere is set,
Baby when I’m through with you
You’ll be forever in my debt.

Now I take my white silk scarf
And bind your wrists together,
Tie you firmly to the bed
Now let me get that feather.

Anticipation in your eyes
The blindfold now conceals,
Let your inhibitions go
And imagination reel.

Feel my kisses captivate your flesh
Enliven every nerve,
The electricity from my mouth
Stimulating every curve.

My tongue cavorts along your cock
Then slithers up and down,
Now get ready for a thrill
My blowjobs are renowned.

Now you’re screaming in delight
Let your orgasm follow,
Keep your cock inside my mouth
Coz babe I always swallow.

My pussy rests above your cock
My position now astride,
I ease myself down onto you
And feel you slip inside.

I work my pussy up and down
Fucking you with glee,
Baby make me cum for you
And I will set you free.

Now untied and blindfold gone
You can touch me with permission,
But what I really want to know is
Did you like submission?

Jennifer C
Jennifer C
43 Followers
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LeBrozLeBrozover 18 years ago
I Need to Clean Up!!!!!

Permission, submission

I'll take the latter any day;

Your writing is so hot,

that all I can say is

yes

yes

yes

yes.....until exhaustion

Bridget69Bridget69about 19 years ago
Having permission...

or being in submission? Personally, I'd have a hard time making that choice. Loved the sensuality in this.

My Erotic TailMy Erotic Tailabout 19 years ago
mention

Your poem was mentioned on the thread

"New Poems Reviews"

Thanks for the journey~

skip.69skip.69about 19 years ago
Sumission?

If you were with me I would submit on every occasion. Oh, if only................. Jennifer, you excel each time you write. And I submit to you. When shall we met so that I can prove it?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
oh

I liked Submission very much indeed Jennifer! Another incredibly erotic sexy poem, I am becoming such a massive fan of your work, you write with such a passion, I think your amazing! Great work x

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