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"1 AM..."

Sunday mornin'
1 AM
sitting
staring off into distances,
into darknesses,
past memory,
creaking - settling - cooling
noises echo soft
and the mind -
wanders, wonders
and finds...

"Wishes..."

I kissed her -
soft,
softer than a feather
being drawn across a fingertip,
my lips touching
touched as if it were her own lips
tasting
finding
her
for the first time...
again
and KNEW
...magic.


"Me..."

I am -
a gentle curiosity,
a Rubic's Cube come to life
with facets to be turned
and turned and turned
'til boredom sets in
then shelved from sight.
A puzzle past being solved,
a moment's triviality -
good for the laugh,
a laugh
once-a-day...
or night.

"Echoes..."

I used to draw -
pastels -
but what I saw
wasn't real
'cept to me.
Now I put my 'vision'
into words -
quiet
simple
little things - words
that I allow to change
all on their own
'til they TOUCH
inside in ways more REAL than
the life we think we know,
ways that can't be believed
yet
somehow
ARE
quite real afterall.

"A Stray..."

The dog ate my shoes
I laughed... you scolded...
Basement flooded -
2nd pair gone.

Your slippers replaced,
mine await in the trash.
I wear the last - quietly,
without complaint -
is as I am, was, and will be.

My belt wore away - 'til breaking
and is gone.
Pants fray - threads age,
seperate, buttons fall.
I window shop - at the malls,
eyes follow as you shop
store-to-store-to-store...
wait as you rest
then follow once more.
You buy for you and yours -
but not me...
is as should be -
I'm just the stray.

Chris Twyford
Ancient117331
04/11/2005

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duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
Early reflections...

Daring transition from pastels to the quiet simple things - Words - made up from letters helter-skelter ~ thrown thoughtfully.

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
~~

Reflections as the world

Grows silent

Watching respectful

Your mind's replay...

Wanton VixxxenWanton Vixxxenabout 19 years ago
I look forward to 1 AM...

every day as I, too, slip into ponder mode to reflect and evaluate Myself and those around Me. This was a unique format that just made the entire replay of your own reflections a very natural, believable work. Wonderful job, and I thank you for sharing this piece with Me today.

Vixxx

Bridget69Bridget69about 19 years ago
1 AM...

is always the best time for random ponderings.

My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Taleabout 19 years ago
1 am

I wasn't snoring, very gripping and witty write!

<chuckleboned> easy flow and I very much enjoyed the giggle

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