Mmmmmm

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Mmmmmm, I moan with anticipation of your touch.
Magic fingertips, silky creamy lips.
Make my body your playground, from head to toe.
Taste me with a deep and yearning hunger.

Mmmmmm, I moan at the memory of your breath.
Exhale as you journey down my back.
Exhilarating tongue dance, ooohhhhhhhh.
Hot breath on tiny wet tracks.
Let me feel your passion.

Mmmmmm, I moan as I inhale your scent.
Your body on my face, that steamy tender place.
Give me all of you, no holding back.
Spread yourself apart, you’ve commandeered my heart.
Let me drown in your passion as I flood you with mine.

Mmmmmm, I moan as I taste your tenderness.
A fair exchange of sweet bliss.
You give so nice, I return the intensity.
Ravage me ravaging you ravaging me
Mmmmmm, Mmmmmm, Mmmmmm so good.
So right, so nice, so complete.


SO THIS WAS A REACH FOR ME, PLEASE LET ME KNOW HOW IT CAME OFF. ALL FEEDBACK AND VOTES ARE WELCOMED. GOOD AND BAD I APPRECIATE IT.

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Bridget69Bridget69almost 19 years ago
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This was truly mmmmmmmmagnificent. LOL!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
You have BEEN there!

MMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM you have BEEN there! I can tell! every word every syllable screams out that you are speaking from the heart (or at least from the gut)...and you loved every aching breaking second of it...!!!

Jennifer CJennifer Calmost 19 years ago
Mmmmmm

Steamy and sexy and

very erotic! Got

me in the mood lol.

Thanks.

~J

WickedEveWickedEvealmost 19 years ago
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Reading this, I can think of several constructive comments I could make. But I'm getting ready to leave for the day, and darn it, I don't have time. I'll try to email you later. Or you may want to post this on the poetry board for some feedback. You'll get great suggestions there. Keep writing! :)