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LadyJeanne
LadyJeanne
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Sliding, slipping,
wetly gripping,
oozing slowly,
gently dripping.

Slickly gliding,
hotly guiding,
teasing, tempting,
swiftly riding.

Shifting, grinding,
tension winding,
rhythm building
breathless, blinding.

Swaying, pitching,
hips bewitching --
throbbing, quaking,
finally twitching.

LadyJeanne
LadyJeanne
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BelegonBelegonover 18 years ago
Ummmmm....

Yeah, I think we can combine some images here...LOL...thanks for the big smile Lady J...

ChagrinedChagrinedover 18 years ago
I don't usually read poetry!

but I am glad I read this one! Great! Loved it and sent a copy to a friend!

Damn good job!

Regards1

LeBrozLeBrozover 18 years ago
YES YES YES!!!!!!!!!!

Now THAT'S a ride!!!

Let me catch my breath and make sure

I didn't make a mess..........

RhymeFairyRhymeFairyalmost 19 years ago
Hot~!

What a ride.

Loved the flow, twist and turns with every word.

Hot imagery, yet smooth as silk.

Wonderful lil poem here~!!

Lia MondeLia Mondealmost 19 years ago
Onomatopoetic

Clever. Pleasing to the ear and inspiringly visual to the imagination.

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