10 things I hate about you

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I hate it that you’re such a hound

that I can’t trust you,

that you screw around.

I hate it that the only one you care about is you

and I wish you’d consider

my feelings too.

I hate it that you never call me

when you’re going out of town

or wherever you may be.

I hate it that you never fill me in,

don’t tell me what you’ve done

or where you’ve been.

I hate it that you’re so conservative

that you’re trying to tell me

how I should live.

I hate it that you’d rather tell me a lie

than face the truth

just coz you’re scared I might cry.

I hate that whenever you say

“I’ll call you back in an hour”

I know from experience you won’t call again today.

I hate it that you treat me this bad,

that you hurt my feelings

and make me sad.

I hate it that between each fight

you give me hope

that everything will be alright.

I hate it that even though we’re through

you keep on making me

stay in love with you.

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5 Comments
tazz317tazz317about 12 years ago
NOW HERES WHAT I LIKE ABOUT YOU

and why I want you back. TK U MLJ LV NV

AmyfriendAmyfriendabout 17 years ago
He's gone but...

he leaves behind an emotional roller coaster - the prick.

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
Can anyone spell 'CAD!'

Love dies slowly ~ pain lingers - until forgetfulness comes.

Emotional melancholy mood seems to linger over these plaintive words...

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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Sounds like

Most every woman's lament

About

Most every man.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
good stuff

I like this poem. nice rhyme without sounding forced.

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