Trinity's shoulder

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She reveals more than she normally would,
like a shoulder strap fallen.
For she has been hot for a while now,
my eyes follow her curves calling.

Barely naked, open to the world,
like wishing for rain over a river.
I just had to finger a touch
for she is a lover and a giver.

I embrace her scent in a summer breeze.
Her warm wetness I feel.
On the parched shoreline shoulders of
the Trinity river, kneeled.


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Jennifer CJennifer Cover 18 years ago
Fabulous as always Art!

I am such a big fan

of your work, you never

dissapoint me. This is a

beautiful piece and left

me with a sense of calm

after I read it. Lovely

work Art, thank you

for writing.

~ Jenn

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
oh...

et ...this is the poem I read last nite on zen...wow it smacks of wanting, longing...empty ..vortex calling...damn this is good...et...I must put it in my favorites...wooh...you ride the waves and spin the river...yes...

dcpoet44dcpoet44over 18 years ago
a longing....

is what i see in this one. there is a lot of genuine feel in this too. it's a nice metaphor you have here. that is my opinion. nicely done art.....don