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Click hereocean in turmoil,
stirs up wreckage
thought lost long ago
surfacing, I see it
now for what it was,
frail and fractured
insuffiently bound
to withstand the assault
wreaked by nature upon it
I stand on shore,
you by my side
view it from a distance
weather clears
sea calms, salvage sinks
I have my salvation
An interesting metaphor with which to drive the message home, while facing life's promises together.
Great metaphors. Buried deep. You have painted a grim picture, with hope for the future. Great poem of hope and love. Sail off into the sunset with this one.
Simple and loving with just the right words. A great
poem, I always say a day at the beach works man. sand