a friend on friendship

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Myalyn
Myalyn
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a friend on friendship

What is friendship all about?
It’s about being there and hanging out.
With your friend you can joke around,
And have conversations without making a sound.
You’re there when you’re needed,
And not always away.
You’re there to the end,
And you’re not going to stray.
A friend is someone who loves and cares for you,
Not someone who’ll use and abuse you.
I thought I had a best friend, someone I could trust,
Well boy was I wrong, and tragically crushed.
I don’t trust anyone now, and doubt if I will,
----- this is for you, from your ex-best friend?
-Jill.

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Well, what do you think? Comments are appreciated! I did write this about 13 years ago... it's high school-ish, I know, but it's from the heart when I was in one of those three friend triangles... ugh.
Hope you liked it, and if not, that's ok too... let me know what you did think, private or public comments.
Thanks again!
Myalyn

Myalyn
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AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
I know the feeling....

In recent years a very and dear friend of mine or so I thought have decided to brek up our friendship, so much for friendship, right? In the matter of fact as I was reading it was imagining about the end of that chapter of my life. And all I needed to do is to replace the name Jill with his.

tazz317tazz317almost 12 years ago
PAIN OF GROWING WITH MATURITY

the feelings now will they be tomorrow. TK U MLJ LV NV

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
fleeting.

Friends can be for a lifetime ~ or for just a Season in the sun. Obviously this is the - end of a beautiful friendship.

LeBrozLeBrozover 18 years ago
~~

I see the roots here,

your words, "Used," began here;

take a look again at the thoughts there

shared by Du Lac in her comment;

you can slim it down and magnify

powerful words still further;

keep it up, you can focus still further

great talent.