Sight of Hand Trick

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Tan arms, blue pants.
Two nouns headed
for the mysterious east,
followed by color.
Puts hand back in
pocket’n’pulls
out a parade
in honor of the
Order of the Eye of the Wing.
At the head of the parade
is a camel with a TV hump,
followed by an incense burner float
and the I Ching High School
Marching Electric String Band.
Before I can see anymore
he puts hand back in pocket.

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LuciousBi-Writes4ULuciousBi-Writes4Uover 18 years ago
nicely done buddy! ;)

great as always BD...floating in the words as they surround us with glorious sounds and syllables!

dcpoet44dcpoet44over 18 years ago
nice work......

and nice play on the hand trick......nicely done...don

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
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True to the style of your name I found myself floating in the visuals of the work. Complexity of simple moments melding a techo world with the natural with the mystery of the mystical hovering inbetween.... all the while leaving images of Boschian revelations.

ty for the journey

du lac~

twelveoonetwelveooneover 18 years ago
what the

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Bill you live up to your name

ReltneReltneover 18 years ago
Excellent

This is well titled.

I like the word choice and juxtaposition.

Thank you for sharing.