Paradise found

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Dawn's rays illuminate eyelids,
coax them open
I gaze upon perfection,your face,
peaceful in slumber,
lips pursed
in seductive smile
while your breath
gently rises and falls
along your form,
breasts and stomach
soft curves of amorous appeal
arouse intent in my mind

I trace my tongue slowly,
lovingly tasting your fragrant flesh,
stop to tease nipples,
suckle and flick
the puckered pink tips,
then continue southward
across the undulating
oasis of your belly,
dip into your navel,
unable to resist

the aroma rising
from between your thighs,
my attention turns
to the altar of my adoration
gently I pry your legs apart,
start a long, slow slide,
tongue wide and flat
pressed to your crease,
softly seperate, insinuate
my instrument of exploration
into the velvety warmth
of your core, tight
tremulous, clenching
at my eager invader
as I taste in anticipation,

fingers twist curls, clutch
my head, pull me in
as hips lift and grind
in slow circles, my nose
inhales intent, inertia takes over
pushes into your proud pink
pea, mashing, prodding
as tongue delves deeper,
mouth opens wider
in attempts to swallow,

be swallowed by you,
drawn into your essence,
essential to my existence,
my fingers slide in ,
more of me you accept,
in alternating rhythm
in opposing openings,
excite as they rub
through thin membrane

assault your senses
my pace quickens,
pretense gone
lust awakened,
hips slam into head,
head into hips
which tighten,
while legs viselike clamp,
no escape
now, tunnel narrows, grips
tongue, as the dam opens
passion's river floods my mouth,
the earth shakes.quivers,
as you deliver the reward I desire

I drink my fill, while you relax,
raise my head, smile,
draw myself to that perfect face
which started it all,
offer a taste of our love
to you, as daylight shines
in your eyes. just another morning
in our paradise.

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
you have a grand

ability to pull the reader with charm and charisma...sinfully delectablue...

My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Taleover 18 years ago
mention

Your poem was mentioned in the thread "New Poems Reviews"

RhymeFairyRhymeFairyover 18 years ago
* Fans Self *

Grrr ~

I am sooo loving this poem.

I can feel it, taste it

and just wanna dive into it ~!!!

Great imagery and

metaphorical usage.

Your words just swirl

into mind and take over.

You really pull a person in

and just fill them up ~!!!

More more more plezz~!!!

Can ya tell I like it?

*Grins*

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