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Click herePassion ignites, as the lovers' moves grow bold.
The fiery cinder burns them, heated bodies mold.
Touches and caresses burn and blaze each night.
Fingers, tongues and moaning, take on erotic height..
Stirring of desire, beckon both their lives.
Heats of quenching fires, burn up the starry skies.
Sizzling sparks of passion, erupt from deep within.
Marking both the lovers, forever burning them.
Growls of lustful longing, bring out the words of love.
Every throbbing motion, takes them far above.
Reaching for the moment, release so close at hand.
Lovers speak no words, giving in to their demand.
Cries of shaking bodies, echo in the night.
Sighs and groans of freedom, rise within their flight.
Floating on the air, they both descend the fall.
Each one is wrapped inside, the other lover's call.
Waiting for a moment, holding on to bliss.
One presses on the other, a soft and gentle kiss.
Stillness reigns around them, peaceful slumber claims.
Lovers keep each other, waiting for more flames.
DC:
I'm proud of you! Thank You. Ronnie W.
more work than its rhyme scheme--which is okay. Sometimes, near rhymes work out just fine. You may want to give free verse a try and watch out for too many cliches. :)
Keep writing and loving what you do.
If you are going to rhyme, stick to your scheme.
"within" and "them" do not rhyme.
Grr~
I love your rhyme and imagery. *Smiles*
You held us close
and gave freedom
to ... release~
Yummy poem of erotic
delights,
that take flight ~
Meowwww~