tight jeans

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bluerains
bluerains
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how easy
she
strips away
neat clothes

like liquid rhythm

each button
a new poem
for the muse
as skin exposes
a sleek canvas

clean, unmarked
by the artist
with fingers
to create
every nuance
of protean taboo
waiting in
the folded
denim blue

bluerains
bluerains
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sweet GA peachessweet GA peachesover 18 years ago
GURL ...........

you made me want to put

on tight jeans ,

just to take them off..

wow !

what a vivd image you

paint of that beautiful

denim blu.......

*winks*

got a 5 from me !!

-sGp-

My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Taleover 18 years ago
wonderful

Others may have problems reading this but I did not, I also don't read with technical (critical) eyes either...but your poem is fine and put a smile on my face...thanks Art~

cymrycymryover 18 years ago
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Lovely imagery in this one. Well done.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
~I~

featured in the new poems review thread.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Nice

But why the short lines? "Liquid rhythm" seems to call for a more flowing format.

Thanks, Blue

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