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bluerains
bluerains
15 Followers

If your body was a language,
I could amuse each
letter with my tongue
in lickidy-split..

If your body was a number,
I would cruise the contours of
your eight
into infinity.
But,
if your body was a moment
seen through the view
of my iris,
I would imagine
you beyond the moon
til all the light was gone..

bluerains
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tazz317tazz317almost 12 years ago
BY STIFLING MOON LIGHT

one must accept the tidal flows. TK U MLJ LV NV

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
This is my favorite of all your writes

I know my vote doesn't count...but, I do it anyway...QP

RhymeFairyRhymeFairyover 18 years ago
Feeling the Blue ~

Sensual and free.

I let this roll across my tongue

and just felt it explode .. Yummy read Blue.

I also have to say again. It has such a sensual feel.

Like a lover caressing your body, just slow, and sexy.

Love it !!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
An enjoyable

poem. Loved the ending!

cymrycymryover 18 years ago
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I loved it all but for one small thing...

"If your body was a language,

I could amuse each

letter with my tongue

in {lickidy-split}.."

'lickidy-split' jars where everything else flows right off the tongue.

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