- Erotic Poetry
- Eyes Closed
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Eyes Closed
Eyes closed, you become my Obession
Eyes closed, you become my Possesion
Eyes closed, I'm drawn to you
Eyes closed, I'm no longer blue
Eyes closed, I feel the burning desire
Eyes closed, I see in your eyes the Fire
Eyes closed, I feel the hard, wet kiss
Eyes closed, I feel the waves of bliss
Eyes closed, our bodies become one
Eyes closed, worshiping you till I'm done
Eyes closed, our bodies so spent
Eyes closed, loving what it meant
Eyes open, and saddness falls,
Eyes open, it was a dream after all
By: Kim Thompson.. August 2005
- COMMENTS
duddle146about 17 years agoExperiencing a dream so real ~ the shock is waking up to reality.
f-cynyrover 18 years agonice use of repetition, and a good strong ending. i enjoyed the poem and can identify with the eyes open.
