- Erotic Poetry
- masturbation
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it s
hard
to fuck
while you sleep
except
when i am
alone
- COMMENTS
KOLKOREabout 17 years agoYou can't see it but the colour of my face is red.
it was supposed to be "the woman is under pressure..." And now I am quoting myself too. Ok I am out of here. Ahhhm ...Yes. Sorry.
KOLKOREabout 17 years agoI like the combination of:
1. Brevity
2. Serenity
3. Humor
I had some trouble with the logic of the connection to the last part (If he is alone how does he know what the heck she is doing and what does it matter anyways).
My suggestion for improvement and a bonus of a pun is: “on the other hand/ when I am/ alone…”
Still, the guy is under pressure - logic is not the top priority, still liked it.
