Thorns of the Clone

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bluerains
bluerains
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Shifting in the hourglass
of internal canting,
stained-glass breaks solitude
with moonbeams of blue.

A winter of secrets bury
vaporous voices prompting
a baneful beast.

In reverence,
erections
to a mummers shrine
becomes another happy medium
to appease tines
without conscience.

bluerains
bluerains
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5 Comments
Bill DadaBill Dadaover 18 years ago
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Very nice, very mysterious.

ty,bd

My Erotic TrailMy Erotic Trailover 18 years ago
<grinin'

I enjoyed your poem blue. 'Bubble gum for the mind" <chewing on it....>

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
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Your poem is mentioned in the new poems review thread.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Good

There are some lovely images here but I feel its spoilt by the wordiness of it all. Is it really neccessary to use a million and one OTT adjectives?

LeBrozLeBrozover 18 years ago
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Another fine write

Prompting a rush

To the dictionary;

Envisioning groups pontificating

As they dissect words you wrote ~

Canting - I like that one.

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