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Click hereA continual cupping
Palming the swelling
Pushing to upthrusting
Haired to silkiness
Sizzling to fondle
Wet seamed to mesmerize
Sway hipped demented
View to trim razored
Lips protruding the pout
Folding to slither
Pinked to inflame
Intruding the prodder
Frothing the surge
Relenting no hint
Glint the dribble
Squint the howl
Too young the taunt
Too taut the muscle
Ass fleshed to swallow
Relief
Young wallows
Old cringes.
This is like the apples in a pie. All the good stuff in one poem, but no crust. I think if you flesh it out with a little crust--some ordinary words and images--it could be an improvement. Just a thought.