- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Out of the Blue
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Click hereas I get older it gets colder
way past half of my summers gone,
then I stop and think out here on the brink
when will I see this summer's dawn
yesterday Blue Rains cleansed my palette
washing away winter's gray leaving in it's stead,
beautiful things like sea oat greens
a sunny day with golden rays
sand left my hourglass forming a heavenly beach
ice cold Stella's floated by easily in reach,
"Comfortabiy Numb" I toast my provider
think I'll run down and drink one beside her
- COMMENTS
twelveooneabout 18 years agosuffers from an erratic rhyme scheme. The first stanza (while being shopworn) is so tight in flow it demands the rest of it follow.
*6
My Erotic Trailabout 18 years agoI enjoy your poetry and this one was sprinkled with the sandspike charm, thanks
Anonymousabout 18 years agoand you might just have a writing neighbor kinda soon.:)
good work spike, always waiting for more from you. You make me feel closer to my natural home
xoxox
marrria
Anonymousabout 18 years agoYou are a true inspiration 4 me this day ...such lovely images from a unique and
poetic soul humbles the heart of blue...a willow sprouts its wings..ty so much for your support...blue
Anonymousabout 18 years agoYou always paint good scenes, sandspike. All of them are clear pictures as this.
