- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Crush
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Click here"You're pretty"
She giggles and runs away
I chase after
Five years pass
We're finally going out
We giggle over that day
The day I told her she's pretty
The day she kissed me
Three years pass
We're on the rocks
Still working on it though
I tell her she's pretty
She runs away
I chase after
Twenty years pass
We still laugh over that day
The day I told her she's pretty
The day I asked her to marry me
- COMMENTS
LeBrozalmost 17 years agoThis poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 35,000 poems.
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My Erotic Trailabout 18 years agoYour poem was mention on the thread, NEW POEMS REVIEWS...
Thanks for the literary journey
~Art~
RedHairedandFriendlyabout 18 years agoCute... I love it... and that was some review Art... ;)
A nice poem... I enjoyed it alot.
WickedEveabout 18 years agoAh, that's so sweet. I should give you a one for being so sweet and making say, "Ah." :)
It really is a nice poem. It made me smile a lopsided smile, and my eyes squinted. I think that meant that I liked it and it's sweet. Or I could have been having stroke or maybe it was gas. Okay, I'm giving you a 100, because it's a nice poem and to apologize for this feedback.
