Where Did You Come From?

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She’s feeling it right now,
a hollow ache deep in her gut, no explanation why.
It’s just there.
Hot tears fall down her cheek and she
can’t talk, can’t breathe.
She tries to explain it, but nothing comes out.
Another hot tear and another gasp of pain.
She’s trying to break away, but it pulls her back in.
Sucks her into a vortex,
a great dark abyss full of black ink that coats her.
Then when the path clears,
there is no answer to the nagging question...
why was she crying?
She had no reason for it,
but the tears fell.
They fell until she felt better
and her soul
was cleansed.

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LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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They call it depression; I call it a secret forgotten pain finally unloading.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Damn landline

DC:

Takes forever to load, but the wait was well worth it to listen to your voice as you read the poem. Thank You. Ronnie W.

My Erotic TrailMy Erotic Trailalmost 18 years ago
where did you come from?

I read the poem and enjoyed it, as I went to 'X' out I saw that it was audio so I clicked and listened to it as well, the audio was incredible and brought this poem to life in a way I never would have seen it, the way the poem is read makes all the differnece in the world, thanks for a wonderful read and an even more incredible lesson from an angelic voice that painted the passion into this poem, very nice (~_~)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
I know that feeling...

when tears are your only salvation, when you can't tell the reason, but the need is there. thanks for saying it so well.

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