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TxRad
TxRad
5,942 Followers

Control
By TxRad

The smoke and mirrors of the mind,
Do so much when they bind.
Who can see and who is blind.
Is it you and are you mine?

Or am I the one,
Who cannot see?
That it is you who are controlling me.

The Dom, the Sub, the ill informed,
All have longings from the day they were born.
The whips and chains they do excite,
But the bonds of the mind have all the might.

Which is wrong and which is right?
Which is strong and holds the key,
The one on foot or the one on knee?
Is it you or is it me?

TxRad
TxRad
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Duckydan49Duckydan49over 14 years ago
Beautiful dance

When all is right the dance of Master and sub are such a delight to behold. It's hard to tell which is up or which is down it is all such a beautiful dance...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Power of the Mind

This is really terrific. I believe a D/s relationship must contain love and respect to work......the power of the mind and the heart is the most important strength of the relationship.IMO!

LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
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A question of control best decided by the most powerfully sensitive erogenous zone, the mind: "bonds of the mind have all the might."

RedHairedandFriendlyRedHairedandFriendlyover 17 years ago
A question I'm sure both Doms and subs ask. . .

Who holds the power? The Dom who can bring forth the sub or the sub who brings forth the Dom. Both hold the power, how the wield it is the beauty of the lifestyle. Great words my friend. ~ Red