- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Watch out for bumble bees
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Watch out for bumble bees
When I was little
I ignored bumble bees.
I watched daisies
and dandelions
and avoided wasps
as they waited on yellow,
poised to puncture
the foot of a supposed
predator. Now
it's the mumbling,
bumbling of fat bees
that I survey hovering
around the lavender,
hung drunkenly in mid-air
looking as if at any moment
their girth will thicken
and send them hurtling
to the ground
at my feet.
- COMMENTS
tazz317about 12 years agoplay a factor in aero-dynamics as well as wallets. TK U MLJ LV NV salutations, my initials and where I live. mlj
Anonymousover 17 years agosounds good in your choice of subject and visuals...blue
Chagrinedover 17 years agoBut the imagery here is superb!
Excellent job!
Best regards,
C
Maria2394over 17 years agoyou offer up in this poem. especially the p's in this part--
poised to puncture
the foot of a supposed
predator.
feels good to repeat several times. a vivid poem, makes me miss my garden
lovely work, WSO, enjoyed very much!
Anonymousover 17 years agoOuch! I think I was stung, so vivid was your writing. :-) Seriously, very interesting poem; I was confused for a moment who was hovering and widening, though, due to a vague referent. You make interesting poems, though WSO. I'm sure many will love this one and I will be sure they see it in New Poems Reviews. C.o.S.
