Tickle Spot

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Man Ray
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tazz317tazz317about 12 years ago
OSMOSING THRU A MEMBRANE

giving sustenance to beauty. TK U MLJ LV NV

LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
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Nice soft sensual haiku with a photo to pull you in.

duddle146duddle146about 17 years ago
life

Vibrant life of flower so reminiscent of the newness of life or purpose. Beautiful Photo.

Man RayMan Rayover 17 years agoAuthor
RhymeFairy, My Erotic Trail, KOLKLORE, anons….

Thank you for your comments, each one constructive.

I’ve heard what you’ve said anon; KOLKLORE, thank you for your considerate wording. I’m flattered that you visit each poem and teach me a thing or two. That aside, this is one in a series of illustrated haikus. As such I must stick with the ‘beat’ to the count of 5, 7, 5 which also entails exacting into the right spot of the image. I too regret having to snip my lovely flower…

Thank you also for the New Poems Review mention.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
needs more work to really bloom

The image is okay, but the words are what really detracts from this illustrated piece. And that's a real problem since words are half of what makes an illustrated poem.

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