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Click hereVibrant life of flower so reminiscent of the newness of life or purpose. Beautiful Photo.
Thank you for your comments, each one constructive.
I’ve heard what you’ve said anon; KOLKLORE, thank you for your considerate wording. I’m flattered that you visit each poem and teach me a thing or two. That aside, this is one in a series of illustrated haikus. As such I must stick with the ‘beat’ to the count of 5, 7, 5 which also entails exacting into the right spot of the image. I too regret having to snip my lovely flower…
Thank you also for the New Poems Review mention.
The image is okay, but the words are what really detracts from this illustrated piece. And that's a real problem since words are half of what makes an illustrated poem.